Reviews for Goddess Mantra
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Oh, that is nice. I love the feminist, "I am woman, hear me roar," feel of this. Some of the adjectives you used to describe the different body parts was fantastic, like "graceful cleavage" and "classy wrists." I love the "sumptuous cunt" bit, too. It's raunchy and dirty, but it works so well. I wonder if there's a typo in the second line - is that supposed to be "hands" instead of "hangs"? At any rate, this is wonderful. I just wrote a poem with a similar theme the other day, actually. That's called "the feminine mystique." Check it out if you're interested. Keep writing! :)