|Reviews for Favourite Time of the Year|
| happysally chapter 6 . 11/26/2014
Oh my god John Donne! I'm impressed hahaha
One small critique, I find it hard to believe she doesn't remember this guy's name... or that maybe she never knew it? Either way, I hope it's explained. The mind does do weird things to cope! I'm still very interested in the story.
| happysally chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Oh my goodness, I only read the first chapter and I'm completely hooked. The way your write is simply delicious.
So far, I love Autumn as a character. I love how confident and smooth she appears, although it's obvious from the way you write that there's something deeper there.
It sounds like it will take a while to find out more about this mysterious, nameless boy, but I am very excited about it.
Brilliant first chapter!
| Brightheart chapter 26 . 8/27/2014
Loved the story!
| Evie Layne chapter 4 . 1/4/2013
That is so hilarious. My name is Haydin but you add a I in between the d and the n
| Guest chapter 27 . 11/6/2012
Did Mitchell really have to die?
| Junkiee chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
This story deserves alot more recognition! Normally, I get bored half way through most of the stories on Fiction Press and stop, but this one kept my attention all the way to the end. Great story!
| bookNINjA chapter 27 . 8/10/2010
wow mitchell was just killed off very randomly, but this was a very nice story. it was so cute
| controlledsoul chapter 27 . 7/7/2010
A truly amazing story. I'm glad I came across this one actually. At some parts, it's a bit puzzling..and a bit fast paced about the two main characters, but either way, I liked it a lot. :) cant wait to see more from yo.
| esssjay chapter 27 . 8/23/2009
at the start of this story i got a really weird vibe, and at first i thought autumn was some sort of female vampire preying on men, and then i realised what was actually going on.
i like the concept of the story, but to be honest there just wasn't a lot of suspension of disbelief with the whole 'autumn can't remember anything about her first love' thing. sure she's been with a lot of guys since, and it's not like she's completely lost her memory but the fact that she doesn't even remember his name ? no way. i mean i was waiting and waiting for it to be revealed that she'd had some traumatic accident and lost her memory. cliche i know, but that honestly is the only explanation; after all, he was her first love. and i think it's too vague about how old she was when it happened ?
i kind of laughed at the name 'leaf' as well. if it was a deliberate play on the autumn and leaf thing it worked on that level, but aside from that, i don't think so. i mean what girl falls in love with a guy called leaf ? no offence.
like i said though, the concept of the story was good and i liked it. i also particularly liked your epilogue. sure it wasn't really an epilogue (like the usual ones) but i liked how you just kind of outlined what had happened to the characters. it gave the impression that this was the end of a movie or something and there would be a montage of scenes depicting where each of the characters were at now. i also liked how it wasn't a happy ever after. it was realistic.
anyway, sorry if i sound really critical in this review. hopefully you take it all constructively. i honestly did enjoy this story, i'm just not good at gushing on and on about all the great things. thanks for the great read !
| Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 27 . 5/1/2008
great story i really enjoyed it. I am glad that Autumn got Haydn in the end. Love the spelling of Haydn very nice.
| sunflower.kiss chapter 27 . 4/13/2008
That was inspiring. Loved it.
| Hannah chapter 27 . 3/17/2008
I LOVE this epilogue, it's short and straight to the point. Everything seems to have ended the way it should...I'll admit I got a little emotional over Mitchell though :( poor guy ... ),:(really crappy crying face there lol)
| jsbrothers chapter 27 . 2/26/2008
I loved this story! I've been reading it since last summer.
I just couldn't wait for a new chapter to be written everytime i finished one. I can't belive the story is over. I hope you write another story so I can enjoy that one just as much.
| One Last Kiss chapter 27 . 2/26/2008
Wow, your story is awesome.! I really don't see why it has so few reviews. It's a lot better than most of the other romance fics out there.
But no! Mitchell is dead? I loved him. He was so cute at the dance when he told Autumn he'd be leaving her. It would have been cool if you did a sort of sequel with Mitchell, but i guess that's not an option now.
| FireInMyBones chapter 24 . 2/7/2008
this is freakin amazing, love it