woot! this is great but i'm a little put off by the way autumn would be around haydn. wouldn't she feel a little strange even flirting with him while her bf is in the other room, especially since they used to date. but i still love her anyway. update soon. i can't wait!

great story! keep up the fabulous work!

wow, fantastic story! This is my first read on I have just made my way over from my HP obsession on and I must say, it's nice to read a good story with unfamiliar characters! I also enjoy the Fall Out Boy lyric inspired titles, and was trying to guess the theme of each chapter with the title..I failed...but I like the way the story is going. How will our tastey Hayden react to the bracelets I wonder...well, I hope you update soon, I'm leaving for six weeks as of next week, and have no computer access really, so I hope to see more before, if not, I'll wait raptly until I get back. Good story!

This was an extraordinary chapter. It was very well put together, and it flowed. I like the way you narrate it from a unique, and not to mention, refreshing perspective. I can't wait to see what happens at the party...

~carm~

great chapter. :)

I was wondering at what age was autumn with her first love.

That one was good, write me the next chapter! Quickly! I liked this one, it showed a more affectionate side of Autumn.

Let's see if I can take a guess at this-

1. I've got a dark alley and a bad idea

2. I slept with someone in fall out boy

3. Champagne/real friends, real pain/sham friends

4. Sophomore slump

5. I know where its from now ;)

6. Of all the gin joints

7. sugar we're going down

8. nobody puts baby in the corner

9. Dark alley/bad idea

10. 7 minutes in heaven

11. Sophomore slump

I have to say, it was way better than I expected form the title/summary. Your writing is detailed and realistic (the only thing that seems over-the-top is that Autmn has actually slept with every guy in her school-but it is a story, after all.) The plot develops pretty quickly - keeping my interest through the whole story so far. I'll be waiting for more!

By the way, I love the fall out boy inspired chapters. I can't figure out where #5 is from, though.

Very nice. I loved it :) I like how she's quite clueless. Good job on this, and update as soon as you can!

~carm~

Woot! it's so exciting! is he just pretending to be with beckett or something. she's really clueless.

Question how do you not remeber your first love?.

Oh wow. That was a brilliant chapter. The storyline is becoming more and more complex. I'm loving it :)

Update as soon as you can!

~carm~

this is so exciting! i hope it is haydn because the whole L mystery has got me confused. is it his twin brother or something?

oh! The sister is BACK! Very awesome! AND I SAID IT WAS HAYDN! But true... I wonder why its an L... Did he change his name? And identity? Just to came back and HAUNT AUTUMN?

Anyway, update soon chica! This story is really picking up!

Lovely chapter. Very nice descriptions, not too wordy, but just enough to give the reader an idea. And great characters. Solid, original, and strongly written. Great job on this, and I hope to read more soon!

~carm~

hey hey! me again!

Liked the chapter, it was awesome. Secret admirer eh? I wanna know who it is! and just who is the guy in the flashback...

Update so I can find out answers!