update soon pls

tragic...it makes me pity her. i hope she can find someone that cares about her for who she could be. i have a friend like this too, but she's changed cuz she realized that shit gets old...realy fucking old. so i hope autumn changes, even a little bit.

Nice chapter hilmary! The characters are really starting to shine through. Mitchell's a pretty alright guy. Autumn is a slut, love it! But is she changing? It sounds a little like it. I guess we'll just have to wait and see...

Update soon chica!

ha! you answered my question! awesome.

This chapter was supa-fly!

IS HAYDYN THE DUDE THAT LEFT HER ALL THOSE YEARS AGO AND NEVER CAME BACK? IS HE?

I'm off to read the next chapter.

Ta ta hun.

I like the chapter, however I've been lost the last couple of chapters. Which guy are we supposed to focus on as Autumn's love interest?

Absolutely wonderful chapter. You have a talent of making strong, well developed characters. And thank you for putting Mitchell in there :D Heh. I'm definitely interested to see where this goes...

~carm~

You've done an absolutely amazing job with this chapter. Everything fits, everything flows, every line is well written, planned. I love it. I hope you update soon!

~carm~

Finally had time to read this, school is TAKING OVER MY LIFE! Ahem. Anyway.

I love it. I really do, and I love Autumn, and Haydn really is a mystery! Somethings happening there! I can't wait till the next chapter chick-a-dee! You blow me away.

Update soon!

Wait. I had one question. Would someone like Autumn really wear sneakers to school? Unless its like school rules you have to have closed shoes or something... I don't know.

Bye!

Such a unique story. But I'll admit it's pretty good. Post More Soon.

Boy, did she have issues.

That was a great ending to a great chapter :) I gotta tell you, I love the way you characterize the characters. They're very realistic, shallow on the outside, deep on the inside. Can't wait to read more!

~carm~

Another great chapter! Nice way of introducing Haydn to the storyline. He's still a mystery, though, and I like that. Update soon, please!

~carm~

I liked it. The introductions are going really well. I like Autumn a lot. She's such a slut, but I can tell that there's something deep and dark inside of her. I can't really say what I think of Haydn yet. He's still too new, but I am curious as to why he's not interested in Autumn. EVERY guy is interested in her. I think I like Mitchell the best so far. Any guy thats that bold is to be admired.

I love the story so far. Well developed characters, nice descriptions, and a great plot. Can't wait to see what you have in store!

~carm~

I have been having so many problems with FP sending me alerts.. its making me crazy! Anyway, I honestly think Joe is a weasel. He's supposedly in love with his girl but there he is, doin' some strange girl at a party? Eww. And the relationship between Autumn and Archer confuses me endlessly. They're obviously in an 'open' relationship, correct? I mean, he didn't go nuts when he found her in a room with another guy so that obviously says something. I'm still anxious for the next chapter!

I do indeed find Beckett adorable... in a sweet and annoying way! She's just both! But anyway, nice chapter, it's good to get to know Autumn's character better, and again I liked the end of the chapter, it really gives a good sense of the double life she's leading. So, nice work. Update soon chica!