I agree much with Lady16, this story seems pretty original because of the leading character. It's true that usually males are seen as the players, but why not us hey? I love the change of pace at the end, it really contrasts the rest of the chapter and ends the whole thing well. Shows you a different dimension to her character already making her pretty real in the reader's minds. It's nice, the writing style gives good insight into the character's thoughts and motives without it being in first person. I'm very curious as to how this story will develop, and I love Autumn already. Keep it up Hilmary!

wow, it's awesome. :)

i love non-good girl types and i'm happy that there was no feeling of cliche when i was reading it. it seemed like something that hasn't been touched on too many times. usually it's the male player who falls in love with the female good girl. please continue. :)