I am...moved. I cannot begin to tell you how much so...

This brought tears to my eyes, the way you wrote it.

So captivaiting, so...real.

As with this teacher, sometimes I just skim stories before reviewing them, but with yours...I want to read every letter, every word, and every sentance.

I really like this. Makes me smile and hope that maybe some of my writings got to at least one of my teachers like this.

Plus it think the root of the story is something we all struggle with from time to time. Are we here for a reason? Or is every thing just random chaos?

This was fantastic. The plot was very simple, day-to-day of sorts, but it was... intoxicating? I was immersed in the basics of life, of highschool, of teachers...

All that I can say is good job. You've nailed it down.

~VM

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. The story itself was a mirror of the story the student wrote. Destiny carries it self out despite whatever motions we make to change it. Liked it lots.