Reviews for Smell The Coffee
Pendingdeletion chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
This story is so good though I don't think it's going to be updated :(
evan chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Hi! I know you haven't updated this in quite some time but please do continue this! Don't give up on such an awesome story!
moonwalkerAspen chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
Oh! That was awesome! Can;t wait for more!
Switch chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out! _
Cealex chapter 2 . 3/21/2007
Omg they have to meet up! :( They'd better next chapter :P I wonder what would happen... Would Jet run away? x_x please no...

I'll be waiting anxiously for your next chapter
Cealex chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Aw that was really sad ;_; Poor Jet and Ash :( Why did that stupid Madison have to interfere? I think you're portraying Jet's personality really well... timid and self-deprecating so he'll never approach Ash himself. Maybe as the story goes on, he'll change.. somewhat?

Now for your next chapter _
Jey chapter 2 . 3/21/2007
This is lovely, I hope you continue :D
Esquirella chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
- whones - Stop teasing me! Make them meet up, darn you!
Amour Amorita Saphira chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
Wow... that was something.. Someone's playing as fate,huh? hehehehe... I really hope Jet won't notice Ash or he's going to freak out or run from him,ne? Ohh.. goddy goddy More More! I love this... hehehe... Thanks for the hard work!
unrequitedx chapter 2 . 3/19/2007
I'm in love..

.. with your story.

Update when you can!
Onion Ring chapter 2 . 3/19/2007
I like it, but you tell too much instead of show. it makes the story rather anticlimatic, but i like your use of language and descrriptions
Amour Amorita Saphira chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
OKay... MORE! *throwing confeties* P Love it Love it! So need to know what happens next! WE... hehehehe... I wanna know what happens next and what's going to happen when they meet each other again. I bet Ash heard it from his parents that they are moving,right? or dash out straight from school? yeay. More, please!
CandehFeind chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Ah! So intruiged!

Great start, I really like it so far.
Esquirella chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Awesome start! Did Ash discover Madison's plan before Jet was supposed to leave? Was that him at the airport?
fivestar ice chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
This story sounds really good, i espeically like the last paragraph. can't wait for the next chapter
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