Reviews for Smell The Coffee |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so good though I don't think it's going to be updated :( |
![]() ![]() Hi! I know you haven't updated this in quite some time but please do continue this! Don't give up on such an awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! That was awesome! Can;t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I just wanted to let you know this story has been added to the C2 Community, "High School Confidential," a place just for slashy high school stories. Please check it out! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg they have to meet up! :( They'd better next chapter :P I wonder what would happen... Would Jet run away? x_x please no... I'll be waiting anxiously for your next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was really sad ;_; Poor Jet and Ash :( Why did that stupid Madison have to interfere? I think you're portraying Jet's personality really well... timid and self-deprecating so he'll never approach Ash himself. Maybe as the story goes on, he'll change.. somewhat? Now for your next chapter _ |
![]() ![]() This is lovely, I hope you continue :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() - whones - Stop teasing me! Make them meet up, darn you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that was something.. Someone's playing as fate,huh? hehehehe... I really hope Jet won't notice Ash or he's going to freak out or run from him,ne? Ohh.. goddy goddy More More! I love this... hehehe... Thanks for the hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm in love.. .. with your story. Update when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, but you tell too much instead of show. it makes the story rather anticlimatic, but i like your use of language and descrriptions |
![]() ![]() ![]() OKay... MORE! *throwing confeties* P Love it Love it! So need to know what happens next! WE... hehehehe... I wanna know what happens next and what's going to happen when they meet each other again. I bet Ash heard it from his parents that they are moving,right? or dash out straight from school? yeay. More, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! So intruiged! Great start, I really like it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start! Did Ash discover Madison's plan before Jet was supposed to leave? Was that him at the airport? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story sounds really good, i espeically like the last paragraph. can't wait for the next chapter |