|Reviews for Origin of|
| ducky-girl chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
This sound awesome! One door opens but leads to many passages. What passages will be taken? What does it all lead to? None may know... exept those whose feet have already tread upon it... WHOA! SERIOUS MOMENT THERE! :-O Where'd that come from? Any hoo, a letter is missing from "her"towards the bottom of the screen other than that great spelling and fluency. Nice detail, i would have to be there to see any more. as the plot goes nice opening, very dramatic and as an added bonus ... THINGS GO BOOM...*giggle* sorry. Well, got to go, until next update...Hadios!
| Curls and Cantarella chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Great Idea! I'll be sure to keep an eye out for this story!
| lilkelly353 chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
| InvaderSTELLAR chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
This is a very detailed story. It seems really sad though.