|Reviews for This Time|
| Zeela Ravena chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
Sound sad to me, becouse I am moveing soon but I have to admit that it is very,cool and unique.
| The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
I liked the last line. Well, without the last line, it would've been hard even for me to see much in this poem. I feel that you were a little too repetetive for such a short poem.
Other than that, great job! Keep it up!
The Reverse Edge Blade
| Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
I like. Suggestive, and eluding to a further story onto itself. I also like the fact that you have established a narrator's voice within a short work. Well done and thanks for posting.