Reviews for picnic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bright and cheery... a vivid little scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute, Sherry. Really cute. But I suppose light-hearted things must be written to counteract the heavier ones. Brings a smile to my face like the temperature drop on balmy summer evenings right before it rains ... Felicia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely adorable! I love the light feel of the poem, and the way you wrote it, I feel almost as if I'm part of this scene. Gorgeous, this goes on my favorites! |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful beautiful beautiful ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *pink easter dress* is the most cheerful image i've visualised in a long time. i love the whole atmosphere and tone of your poem - it just shines. |