Reviews for picnic
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Bright and cheery... a vivid little scene.
felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Cute, Sherry. Really cute. But I suppose light-hearted things must be written to counteract the heavier ones.

Brings a smile to my face like the temperature drop on balmy summer evenings right before it rains ...

Ajna chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Absolutely adorable! I love the light feel of the poem, and the way you wrote it, I feel almost as if I'm part of this scene. Gorgeous, this goes on my favorites!
Lisa98 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007


beautiful !
teh tarik chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
*pink easter dress* is the most cheerful image i've visualised in a long time. i love the whole atmosphere and tone of your poem - it just shines.