|Reviews for picnic|
| Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Bright and cheery... a vivid little scene.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Cute, Sherry. Really cute. But I suppose light-hearted things must be written to counteract the heavier ones.
Brings a smile to my face like the temperature drop on balmy summer evenings right before it rains ...
| Ajna chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Absolutely adorable! I love the light feel of the poem, and the way you wrote it, I feel almost as if I'm part of this scene. Gorgeous, this goes on my favorites!
| Lisa98 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
| teh tarik chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
*pink easter dress* is the most cheerful image i've visualised in a long time. i love the whole atmosphere and tone of your poem - it just shines.