Reviews for revolution
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Oh wowzers! I think this all the time! My parents and brother and friends always say "That's just how it is, you can't change it," but it's not true. Nothing has to be the way it is.

Only one spelling error: Fas(h)ions.

I love the capitals, they really show the emphasis you are trying to make.

Great job!

Falcon
PM20 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Powerful words, it reminds me of something out of the freedom protests in the 60's especially the lines that start with "tell me pretty girl." But really this could be applied to anything especially things that are going on right now, it would be nice to see more kids take a stand for what they believe in. Thanks for sharing.