Reviews for Third Time's the Charm
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
It's cute :)
Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Super cute and I really like the different approach that you used! Great job! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl
Cecily Mitchell chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
So cute! (Although cute might not be what you want to hear.) I like it. It's a different to attack a tried and true storyline. Love it :)
anna chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
AW! The ending just made me go "so swet!" like a happy little girl. This is such a nice one-shot! And the length's just right. Great job!:)
Leila chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
I am absolutely in love with this.
ukrgrl chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
I'm glad you chose to use a happy ending for this :) otherwise it wouldn't be such a nice story
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
WHE! Great story!

xx
the ignorance of it all chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Oh my. Absolutely beautiful. Some people try so hard to write simply yet beautifully, but fail misery. You, my dear, have succeeded in making it look effortless. You conjure perfect images of your characters in the readers' head, using only a half of a line.

Simply amazing.
centenarian chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Well...At first I was confused with the second person thing but I got it figured out. Well, it's nice to have a guy's POV I suppose. It's cute. Real cute. So happy for them, really I am. Hey, I just rhymed. Ahem. Anyways. good job, it was short but nice.
Fer chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Wow! Very nice, I love how you told it all in a very simple and lovely way...

Congratulations!
forever chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Lucky that i read the happy ending one then eh? I like happy endings.
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
sweet
Singingperson chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
one word.

beautiful.
x3life chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
aw ) he told her in the end which is good. haha.
Dream that was Life chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
That was very pretty. Second person gets me confused alot, but it was still very nice.

R.
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