That was lovely. Thank you for posting this.

Really quite gorgeous. However, it could be continued. I would be quite happy if there was a sequel. Very cute, and I love the characters. Awesome as, though there are some things that wouldn't really happen (or would be improbable to happen) in real life. Other than that, well done.

I love this story,your friend has a lot of her(him?)from me that she(he?) needs to write and post more of her work.I love crime storys and m/m so this was a perfect story for me,though i cant say a little more sex would have hurt,it was a little to vague, the sex scene was i mean.I hope i get to read more work by your friend soon. ;)

Loved it~!

Really love the story.. I was crying in the last part when they're making love, thinking that it will be their first and last. Its was one heart breaking scene. But I totally LOVE the ending. I always like happy ending. Tell your friend to write some more. And join this site and write here. hehehe

Aw that was so sweet. They are adorable together!

This is cute :D

I loved it! It was dirty, suggestive, action packed, all while still maintaining the story line; which, in and of it's self is great!

that was really awesome.

i hope there is a sequel

AW.

Shannon is too lovable! lol.

FAVS. LOVE HOW THIS STORY WORKED OUT!

First off...I had no idea you had a fictionpress O I have found you honey

This is very good and well written. I loved it!

thats a wonderful story ..its just remind me of a yaoi manga that i read where the thief only reason to steal is because to make the detective chase him...but whatever the plot is..you sure do a cool story about it..and i enjoyed it thoroughly! so thanks for the story! _~

Aww... that was such a sweet story. I loved the characters and how they interact - Shannon is so adorable _ - and the premise of the story too, it's very original.

lovely story. had fun reading it. thanx. pls tell your friend to keep writing...