|Reviews for Shannon|
| Night Reader chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
That was lovely. Thank you for posting this.
| DontYouWantToKno chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Really quite gorgeous. However, it could be continued. I would be quite happy if there was a sequel. Very cute, and I love the characters. Awesome as, though there are some things that wouldn't really happen (or would be improbable to happen) in real life. Other than that, well done.
| Cayla the magic cookie chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
I love this story,your friend has a lot of her(him?)from me that she(he?) needs to write and post more of her work.I love crime storys and m/m so this was a perfect story for me,though i cant say a little more sex would have hurt,it was a little to vague, the sex scene was i mean.I hope i get to read more work by your friend soon. ;)
| Starcrazed chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
| Limeru chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Really love the story.. I was crying in the last part when they're making love, thinking that it will be their first and last. Its was one heart breaking scene. But I totally LOVE the ending. I always like happy ending. Tell your friend to write some more. And join this site and write here. hehehe
| annne chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Aw that was so sweet. They are adorable together!
| Teldra chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
This is cute :D
| magic drack chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
I loved it! It was dirty, suggestive, action packed, all while still maintaining the story line; which, in and of it's self is great!
| vlight chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
that was really awesome.
i hope there is a sequel
| DefineNightmare chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Shannon is too lovable! lol.
FAVS. LOVE HOW THIS STORY WORKED OUT!
| insaneblondemidget14 chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
First off...I had no idea you had a fictionpress O I have found you honey
| Account Disused chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
This is very good and well written. I loved it!
| nomy chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
thats a wonderful story ..its just remind me of a yaoi manga that i read where the thief only reason to steal is because to make the detective chase him...but whatever the plot is..you sure do a cool story about it..and i enjoyed it thoroughly! so thanks for the story! _~
| shiftblue chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Aww... that was such a sweet story. I loved the characters and how they interact - Shannon is so adorable _ - and the premise of the story too, it's very original.
| SanJ chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
lovely story. had fun reading it. thanx. pls tell your friend to keep writing...