Reviews for Fine Lines |
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Minor Masterpiece chapter 1 . 7/10/2009 This made me kinda sad. :( Not a bad thing, it's great that you can evoke emotion. I really like the idea of writing a story like this. I am jealous. (: -xoxo |
Net chapter 1 . 8/6/2007 Hm. I'd like to, make something based on one of your works. A painting, maybe. Need to work on one soon anyway. |
cobwebbed eyes chapter 1 . 7/10/2007 Your ideas, your writing. You're amaing. |
Jaded Panic chapter 1 . 7/7/2007 hi, you're officially the best author on this site. the fact that you're able to take these odd, abstract ideas and turn them into such amazing art is just...wow. it just makes me sad that some of your reviewers don't seem to understand that. anyway, this was great. i could really feel the girl's heartache and anger and love for him... you really pulled this list-ish thing off. not many people could, but you definitely did it. i'm completely in awe. awesome job. :D -jaded- |
Kaella chapter 1 . 7/4/2007 I like this. It's intricate, but in a simple sort of way. |
Feel The Waltz chapter 1 . 6/26/2007 *is awed at you talent & in much envy* :] |
Rock on an Ocean Shore chapter 1 . 5/13/2007 You manipulate language so well. The list idea was very original and I loved the specifics you added, such as the lychee martini. Your experimental fiction is very effective. |
multiples of six chapter 1 . 4/22/2007 Incredible. I love the way this is written; it's very original but completely comprehensible & moving. The "places I had dreamed of visiting with Trick" made me sad. The last line was really intense, too. You're very talented. |
Divine Writer chapter 1 . 4/4/2007 I have one problem...I have no idea whether your a girl or a guy, but I sorta think your a girl. |
Jessie Gee chapter 1 . 4/2/2007 This made me tear. |
sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 3/20/2007 "Tell me who she is and I just might not kill her" I just love this line! Hahaha..! Been laughing over it while reading the rest of the story. :) Great story! I especially loved the last line (and the one up there). :) |
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 3/18/2007 Wah.. ( You're so creative, but the overall theme here reminded me of me in that highly depressing way. -sniffles- I seriously wanted to cry, and somehow I don't believe that's what you were aiming for. |