This made me kinda sad. :(

Not a bad thing, it's great that you can evoke emotion.

I really like the idea of writing a story like this.

I am jealous. (:

-xoxo

Hm. I'd like to, make something based on one of your works. A painting, maybe. Need to work on one soon anyway.

Your ideas, your writing. You're amaing.

hi, you're officially the best author on this site.

the fact that you're able to take these odd, abstract ideas and turn them into such amazing art is just...wow. it just makes me sad that some of your reviewers don't seem to understand that.

anyway, this was great. i could really feel the girl's heartache and anger and love for him...

you really pulled this list-ish thing off. not many people could, but you definitely did it. i'm completely in awe.

awesome job. :D

-jaded-

I like this. It's intricate, but in a simple sort of way.

*is awed at you talent & in much envy*

:]

You manipulate language so well. The list idea was very original and I loved the specifics you added, such as the lychee martini. Your experimental fiction is very effective.

Incredible. I love the way this is written; it's very original but completely comprehensible & moving. The "places I had dreamed of visiting with Trick" made me sad. The last line was really intense, too. You're very talented.

I have one problem...I have no idea whether your a girl or a guy, but I sorta think your a girl.

This made me tear.

"Tell me who she is and I just might not kill her"

I just love this line! Hahaha..! Been laughing over it while reading the rest of the story. :)

Great story! I especially loved the last line (and the one up there). :)

Wah.. (

You're so creative, but the overall theme here reminded me of me in that highly depressing way. -sniffles- I seriously wanted to cry, and somehow I don't believe that's what you were aiming for.