Reviews for to be a god of fire and water
felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Pretty. The whole thing is fast-paced and lovely-ly worded. I enjoy this sort of thing on slow days ... such as today.

Well writ, Sherry.

Felicia.
theCoffeeEnzyme chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
Forgive me for my...obsessive reading? lol

But, you are a very talented writer.

This piece was good. The imagery was splendid and the diction was impressive and you use a few interesting parallels in this piece that I liked very much. The title was slightly confusing because I'm not quite certain how the speaker could look at himself as a god since he seems so sad but, the confusion is probably my fault rather than yours.

All in all, it was very, very impressive.
Cianna Greenwood chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Wow, I actually really liked this one. Pyromania is a rather original subject, you used one of my favorite poetic devices - I've forgotten what they call it, when you put the line break in the middle of a sentence - and I found your use of descriptive language very pleasing. All in all, I'd call it a fair success. _

Keep writing.