Reviews for A Little Bit Crazy |
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akiraasato chapter 18 . 3/29/2012 This story is too cute for me to skip for reviewing. This should have more reviews! THIS STORY IS JUST SO COOL! Thank you for writing it. Thank you for putting and pouring your ideas into it. Thank you. |
Heise chapter 18 . 2/26/2012 This is completely adorable. I loved Carrie so much! She was sweet and cute and nice. :) She and Seth were really a perfect fit! Great job. I loved this a lot. |
fianna chapter 11 . 2/25/2012 lets see, ur story had a good storyline but the main character really didn't know how to say anything. i just hope u can improve her dialogue more cos this story really isn't that interesting and i have to say i wasted an hour reading this when i couold be doing something else |
swords dragons and diet coke chapter 18 . 2/5/2012 Awwww this is so cute! I honestly love Seth and Carrie together, and I have to agree; Italians do do it better! |
wervelende chapter 18 . 2/3/2012 Aw, this was cute! Any guy who would read "Ella Enchanted" for you is a keeper! |
dreeming chapter 18 . 12/25/2011 I can't tell you how much I lovelovelove this. |
Heather chapter 18 . 12/11/2011 This was the best story I have read! I'm a total bookworm lol. And I just started reading this amazing story on Sunday and finished right now in the peak of the morning. I'm worse than the main character when it comes to reading. Anywho, awesome, fantastic, beyond words story. P.s. there are many amazing stories out there too (just for anyone who reads this) |
waitingForRand chapter 18 . 11/23/2011 Its cute :) |
Knight5 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 The pizza hooked me. The first two chapters made me laugh so hard, I fell in love and finished the whole story in one day. Overall it was amazing - the best online story I've ever read. One thing that bothered me, though. Seth's inhumanly awesome. Nobody's perfect, and there's gotta be a good reason for him to love our helpless little Carrie besides "she's cute when she blushes." True, she pwns him at ddr and water wars. But as the story progressed I just got more and more annoyed at Carrie for being completely selfish and oversensitive, and in disbelief that Seth never got mad even once. This guy's alien goodness makes him hard to connect with and makes his match with Carrie seem...off. Also, the story, though entertaining, doesn't have any meaning to it. It's just a happy ending princess type story. I'm not saying that every story's gotta be as deep as Jane Eyre, but if you're looking to be published someday you'll need to go just one step further. Get some themes. One or two moral lessons. And then you'll be set. It was a fantastic read. Keep up the good work. |
CutieSOS chapter 18 . 9/26/2011 It was so good! |
SunshineRay chapter 18 . 9/26/2011 Hi! I just finished reading your story in one day, and even re-reading my fave parts because it was just so good! I love your characters, esp Carrie because i can totally relate to her -She's a bookworm and she LOVES ELLA ENCHANTED! And she's sensitive too, and I actually really like how you wove that realistic aspect into her character because I could relate to it. :] I literally SQUEALED when we found out that Seth read Ella Enchanted for her-oh my goodness! (I'm a very suqealish girl, i'll tell you now that that wasn't the only part that got me jumping on my seat!) Angelo was awesome too, such a lovable character! Keep up the great work! |
mallow.puff chapter 18 . 9/13/2011 I clearly have no idea why there aren't more reviews for this story. It was lovely and not overly cliché.. Plus I really admire the way you write and Carrie's perspective is so fun to read. |
chellygoesrawr chapter 18 . 8/22/2011 Oh gosh, this story was adorable! I loved the relationship between seth &carrie. I like how you didn't make Carrie change so much, that by the end of the story, she's still herself- cute, shy, and awkward. &Gotta love Angelo- "Italians do it better" LOL. Thnaks so much (: |
RiBow chapter 18 . 7/30/2011 I found this story today and ended up finishing the whole thing today. I couldn't allow myself to stop and take a break! This story is just so... indescribable. It's a real page turner that I certainly wouldn't forget in an instance. It went straight to my Favorites List! D I thought Seth was adorable and suited Carrie so much. And even though they're together, my favorite couple just has to be Evan and Christine. This story was wonderfully written and I thank you for a day's worth of awesome reading. -RiBow. |
chocoyum4 chapter 18 . 5/4/2011 I found this story yesterday, and I fell in love with it! You practically described my personality! It was quite scary haha. I so enjoyed reading this! Thanks so much for sharing your story. ~chocoyum4~ |