Haha. This sounds like a great idea. And the competition between the pizza places is awesome. Oh, and I laughed so hard when I read this line: I knew there was some wrong with me when I realized that the one guy who had ever really hit on me turned out to be an evil spy from Pizza Hut who was only buttering me up so I wouldn’t suspect his true nature.

Ahh, I think I'm still laughing. UPDATE!

oh wow! this is really cute! please continue :D

I like the writing style in this piece. Believable and yet humourous at the same time. The summary for this story caught me and I liked what I read. I'm curious where the story's going from here. The goldfish named Calvin and Hobbes were a nice touch, too.

O_O pizza hut has spies? dude, thats weird.. but you story is hilarious! aww... the poor fishie died! i would have given him a bandaid.(pause) HAHAHAHAHA!rotflol. update soon!