Reviews for A Fairy Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet. Thank you for writing this enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really sweet I love it,:) Rain was so sweet and caring and Hyacinth was the dominant in the relationship and the manly one but compare to typical stories that show them as jerks you show him as a sweet man so one.:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was wonderful! I love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably the best slash fairy tale oneshot I've ever read :) And it's written five years ago! I'm glad Hyacinth and Rain finally ended up together :) and hopefully live happily ever after lol. Keep on writing stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, fairy love. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhh. And now my day is three million times better than it was. 3 Rain and Hyacinth are so adorable! And the Faerie Queen strikes me as slightly selfish, but she doesn't let that show in any way other than her desire to be with Coriander and Lucern. Great short story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good! The entire plot was quite well done, especially for being a single chapter story like this. I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW!11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a very good read. I thought that Amaryllis wasn't too bright not telling her loved ones what she was up to. Oh well-it all worked out for everyone in the end :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY PREETY FAIRY BOYS! hehehe Alhough... the rainbowness WUZ a little cheezy lol! SO CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() -dies of happiness- My god, i wish someone would draw a picture of this. afhiuewfiurebge3iug |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was satisfying. Everything just fell into place at the end. Amaryllis might have been powerful, but she doesn't seem all that clever. Rain should have been wearing a shift (chemise, cote, etc.) under that corset because a shift can be washed and a corset can't, but I guess none of the dresses needed washing anyway. Maybe Amaryllis had a spell on her clothes to keep them clean. I wonder whether Hyacinth will simply move in. Will they tell the populous that Rain pretended to be Amaryllis for all those years or let them think what that the queen is just now abdicating? Anyway, Rain can look forward to warm breakfasts from now on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing fantastic splendid good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was really long, it took me like an hour to read, but it was so worth it. Incredably beautiful and descriptive. Rain is such a cute character! And he makes a great Queen XD Most of the time oneshots are kind of lacking in point or plot but you did a really good job keeping the main plot and a few side stories interesting and then tying them all together at the end. Beautiful job! |