if you will finish/complete it, i think it will be even better than catharsis or Predator. it has potential. you have potential.
and i'm not telling/writing you this so you'll finish/complete it. i'm saying/writing this because i think it's better, way better than your other fics.. i like it.
-Zeela.

what a shame, you'll never finish this story. It was very good too. Hmm.

i do believe this story will never be update. Such a shame... it has so much promise /

Thrill, horror, mystery and crime. I like it :)

Update any time soon? :D

oh wow... I think i'm seeing another masterpiece form! this is an amazing start and i can't wait until you update more.

Your characters have been well developed, even though you've just started, and I'm really starting to love Rent. All these people are screwed up, which is just the way i like them :)

Keep writing, you're doing a great job!

You manage to come up with the most exhilarating plot lines. I love this one, so full of bad deeds and sin. Hehehe.

Ooii, but i wanna know what happens next, if everyone or more than one person manages to kill the person on their list. There can only be one winner, so does the game go on until people start losing? Or do the rules change after one round? And if there can only be one winner, someone's going to lose eventually. And if they lose, then they die. So. . . Is everyone going to end up dying except the one who's victorious?

I feel like there's gonna be some backstabbing and alliance-making! Oohh, I can't wait.

Die, die, die! I love your stories, mate. It's the ominous stuff and wrong doings that make up the most exhilarating.

update soon. don't abandon this story.

love.

sigh wish this wasn't on hold!

i love it.

ah yes, killing oneself is so simple...lol.

update!

Brilliant~! For some sick reason I really love Rent...heehee. XD

The fact that he's a genius, perhaps?

But...the game. Original. I wouldn't want to play it, though. :O

Update!

I absolutely love this even though it's on hold. Great job.

gah! such an awesome plot in my opinion. this is really old though. will you continue it? or is it over?

Excellent story. Wonderful plot, good characters, supenseful and mysterious. You kept me hooked in until your powerful conclusion. I liked it a lot, especially the small triangle you have going with Rose, Rent and Parker. JJ was funny.

Great short story again!

~Abby

They're messed up, so very messed up, but I bet people like this exist in our society... creepy thought o_o

But seriously this is really good, I like this sort of thing not to sound psycho or anything. I really really like Rent for some odd reason XD and Rose is such a bitch, Parker is so completely whipped and I'm not quite sure what to make of JJ... overall they are a strange group, all meshed together _

DO continue :D

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Holy sheit! Haha. Omg. Please update. This is SO good.

o...this sounds real interesting. Love the plot, very original. Please update! It's been like forever.