Reviews for Something's Missing
pixieofdarkness chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
hey, i like this, it could also be a song, good repetion.
DeathMetal18 chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Something’s missing.

And I know that pretty soon

it won’t be missing anymore. Favorite line. It is so sweet. I have to say, this may sound gay, but your poems are pretty inspirational, I might write more to my poetry thing, but I am taking them out of a story and making them seperate. I still think this is amazing .

-Twilight Wolf
felicia13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
*embarrassed and guilty* I feel badly for leaving you every once in a while ... quite badly.

The repitition of "Something's missing. / ... / but something's missing." was irritating at first, but served its purpose, so it was ok in the end. Other than that, I don't have any real problems with this poem. It's nice. Kinda cold, yet fuzzy at the same time. Does that make sense? No, but it's ok 'cause I'm me, alright?

In any case, there are some bits that I could laugh to myself a little because I know and other people won't. I laugh at those people and eat thier souls when they aren't looking.

I hope you can find her soon, love.