What a great annoying painful wonderful story...
You did great author!

It seems like a new beginning.. they shall be together again.. am I right? Orrr am I right? :P

If he loves her why does he keep calling her bitch or whore or something else

That was an amazing story, loved every chapter and all the characters in them xxx

i loved the story. i had read it several times and always found it with different emotions to begin with.

I guess I should have listened to you when you said it was more women's blah blah than romance. You chapters are super long and I love that, but now that I've reached chapter 17, I checked the reviews and it turns out they didn't end up together. I feel like it was just a waste of time to read about 100k words and get caught up in Madison and Darick's romance and not have their happy ending. It's just so sad, you know? You write great and all, but it would've made me so very happy to see them end up together. I'm just glad I decided to check the reviews before reading more. If I finished all 100 chapters instead of 17, I'd feel worse because I stuck with them through 1m word story and have nothing come out of it.

So. I just read 68 chapters, and the whole Darick and Madison coupling was looking bleak because I started to realize just how selfish Madison actually was and didn't really want her to end up with anyone so I decided to read the reviews. And now I know that they don't end up together, I feel like I wasted my time. Good story, but I can't find it in me to read more.

I read 100 chapters... And they didn't even end up together. I'm so disappointed. What a waste. ;-;

Great story overall. I could not stop reading until I was finished with it. My emotions got attached to a lot of the characters both positively and negativity. I also like the realism in the story in regards to the relationships and the realistic outcomes to them. I felt for a second there, you was going to end it with the charm makes Madison realize her love for Darick and just drop everything, even though she committed herself to Ethan and the loyalty to her father and her sisters. All the characters had great development. I liked how Brad and Lydia ended up being like their parents and the possibility they may end up loving each other in time. I liked how it seems like Ian will end up with Brianna after all, which is what I was hoping for. The only characters I didn't like, but understood their purpose, was the twins and Abigail. The woman was such a lap dog to Darick and wouldn't fight for what she wanted. Darick also rubbed me the wrong way a lot, but at the same time, I connected with him in a sense. Mainly, he learned he can't have everything his way and grew up some. Which is why the ending of Madison suddenly running off with him would have disappointed me. But I've yet to read the epilogue as of this review.

I could go on, but this review would fill up a chapter, itself. You definitely should publish this story in a book. Or hand the story off to a television studio for a possible script. It deserves to be seen done with live actors, or animation if that's your preference. Patent it first, of course.

I don't write reviews often; only ones for stories that truly deserve it, and yours truly deserved it.

Well done.

so in the end they didn't end up together. :( i liked the madison and darick couple.

Great story! I hope you continue writing.

I'm a little disappointed at where you left off in the epilogue, and how you didn't elaborate more on Darick and Madison's bittersweet time together.

Albeit the story is quite long, it does serve its purpose by covering a lot of the dynamics of love.

I also really like the characters, although I don't really prefer Abigail, Lydia, and Emily. But I do like how the girls seem empowered in the relationships in contrast to being weak and pathetic. Or in other words, I love how the guys show some "female" emotions.

I will be a disappointed if Darick and Madison do not end up together, and instead he and Brad gives in to their arranged marriages.

I really liked the story...in the beginning i thought that there would be something between Madison and Arion...but nothing.

I don't know why but I really wanted them to be together!

I loved the twins!

There were nice twists and turns in the story. Epilogue was very good!

I hope you continue with the second part of the story.

I loved reading it...thank you for the story!

This story was awesome!

When I started I thought I would never finish it! But I read it through and I am glad I have done so.

Did you start writing when you first published it to fictionpress and finish on your last update? I'm just curious, because in 18 months i've only managed to write just over 200k words, and i'd say wow for writing speed and brilliant quality. Though I do think that you should add the epilogue(s) to the main story because I LOVED the epilogue.

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Hello,

I just thought i'd let you know that i've just finished your book and I really enjoyed it, so much so that you have now persuded me to write my first review. (Please excuse my spelling I have problems with it) I thought you made it really realistic and had an excellant plot line, when I read a book I normally stick to liking the same characters but during your book I switched from character to charater as they are had such different personaliltes that got revelied after time.

Well done!

Jenny