Reviews for Redefine
Divine Writer chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
No one knows anyone, until you read their minds, and until people learn how, were stuck with crazy people walking the streets everyday.
notated descant chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
I can't count how many times I've felt like this... the only thing I'd suggest is breaking them up into stanzas to be both visually appealing, and at the same time, organizing your poem. Good job!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
I loved the last three lines. They really tied it all together. Wonderful job. Keep it up.