Reviews for Seizing the Sky
AnonomousNotReally chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
great job! i really got the feel of what you were saying. hey, i would bve etstatic of you read and reveiwed my story, Home for the Normal Impaired. I dont want to seem like i'm fishing for reviews of anything. Great job!
ChronoClockXVII chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
If you could send me a copy of The Contract to I would be really appreciative. I was one of the original readers and was very sad to find that it isn't available to reread. I can't believe people would attempt to plagiarize, how does that even work?
emmargh chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
my email wont show up, so ill give it so you with spaces between the words.. just remember to take the spaces out, lol

cant spell dilemma without emma hotmail . com

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emmargh chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
hi, you may or may not remember me, but i was totally in love with your stories.

i read a story on here the other day that reminded me of the contract and it made me want to read it again, something ive been meaning to do for a while.

you would not believe how shattered i was when i found out you had removed all your stories!

Then again, considering the reason i came calling to read them again i can understand why you wanted to stop any more people having the chance to plagiarise.

I just wanted to say that i'll miss reading your stuff and i hope you get published!

also, if you ever need someone to edit for you, my email is

hope to hear from you soon!

xx
Silver chapter 28 . 6/2/2009
I love this story. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure if I've mentioned this. But yeah. ;] You're one of my fav. authors on fictionpress.
demi.91 chapter 28 . 5/19/2009
Hey.

This is really good. It's so original and very...emotive.

You're a great writer, very talented.

The only thing I'm sad about is alot of her friends die.

I also think there should be a sequel :)
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 19 . 5/16/2009
This is really starting to give me the creeps (in an your-an-amazing-writer-because-i-never-get-scared-in-books way :D)

I just realised that this story knid of reminds me of the tv series Lost, in the way that you never know whats going on and your hopelessly addicted and its haunting and scary, but brilliant!
AndItMovesUsAll chapter 9 . 5/16/2009
Oh wow, this story is so good and so original! I love all the futuristic stuff, like the chips in the head and the visual phonecalls and lifts. The action is amazing, keeping me addicted and im forever curious about whatas going on, although now i know that Feisty was the rat and im disappointed because i didnt want it to be one of her friends! Cant wait to read on!
Rye-Pockets chapter 28 . 5/15/2009
Your last story? I remember you... from several years ago, when the Contract still wasn't finished - I never reviewed back then, so you definitely don't know me - but wow! Time has passed! You have so many amazing stories up!

I really hope you'll do well. I have complete faith you will. And the Contract being published... yeah, I'd buy it, even if I've already read it. I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one who feels that way. _ I'd buy it twice.

And this story was terrific! Really, it was. I'm so happy for you! You're on LJ now, huh? I'll drop a very enthusiastic HI! one day, out of the blue. _

You're an amazing writer. Always remember that! Don't let anyone tell you differently!
D-Mish chapter 28 . 5/8/2009
I never really understood what went on with Clipse and Meera - towards the end anyway. The ending didn't make too much sense either. Great story though - totally loved it. I want a sequel or something!
silver shaft chapter 28 . 4/8/2009
this was awesome...aw simmer came back...i like clipse though :).
We Used To Wait chapter 28 . 3/1/2009
Yay review time! M. I lurved it. I luvoei it so much that i wanna. . . . . Hm.

One of my favourites! But then again, you're one of my favourite authors. I thank you for such an awesome story, and ntm the Contract, and your other stories are my favourites. I spent the entire day trying to finish, and now I need to get down to my sleepless load of homework. sigh. i am so irresponsible.

anyway, it was beautiful in my eyes. And i'm sad this is your last story. . . oh well.

I LOVE YA, (one of my favourite authorzz!)

-peace!-
Imagination's Dust chapter 21 . 2/14/2009
I liked the plotline in the story...yet the character's unbelievable horniness didn't cut it for me. She's supposed to be in the army, even if not in direct battle, and she can't control her lust around a supposed enemy? Teenagers are hormonal, but we're not THAT bad. o_O

- HT
Kelsci J. Sceasel chapter 28 . 1/27/2009
That was...freaking amazing. Honestly, I'd buy that book. If it was published, I'd totally spend money on it.

It just feels...a little incomplete though. I kind of wanted the war to end. But then again, there's no real answer to war. If one side is victorious, no one is victorious. So I guess that's okay.

Unlike all those Clipse-lovers out there, I actually really hated him. But I guess that's because I hate things I can't understand. He's just so confusing. I never know what his real intentions are. Simmer, on the other hand, is a sweetie-pie. The only problem with the whole Meera-Simmer relationship is that it seems a little sudden...you know, like, I didn't get to know Simmer well enough. If you ever decide to edit this, I'd play up their relationship a bit more.

This story made me laugh and cry...it was just awesome sci-fi. And I like how it wasn't like totally romance or totally sci-fi...there was just enough of both. Okay, I'm done praising.

Honestly, it's one of the best stories I've read on this site.

-Kelsci
Jaliy chapter 28 . 12/28/2008
great story..and the fact that she didnt get together with clipse was a bit sad..because I really liked clipse..more than Simmer..but its alright Simmer will do..

Great job!

Jaliy!
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