| Reviews for A Kiss Of Darkness |
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   mysticthunder chapter 9 . 3/25/2008 I like this a lot, can't wait for more! |
| Lulai chapter 9 . 3/25/2008 alright, I'll bite (haha, a little vamp humour there). I really am enjoying this story. It's quite a drastic improvement from the first chapter to this one. There's a couple of things that I would suggest. One, since your chapters are pretty dialogue heavy (and there's nothing wrong with that, considering I do the same), I would brush up a little bit on your dialogue grammar. Like so... "Blah blah blah(COMMA)" (LOWERCASE)she said. That's the only major thing that stood out to me. It would be nice, especially in the earlier chapters to have the separate sections to be, well, separated, but I know what a pain that is, and I know how this site seems to edit out all that kind of stuff, so, I can figure it out. Alexander is pretty darned dreamy. Can this review count as ten so that you'll put up your next chapter sooner? |
| violet-eyez chapter 9 . 3/25/2008 can't wait till the next chapter |
| Juni Lyn chapter 9 . 3/24/2008 I finally made it through the story. Interesting idea, I simply |
| sillygoose2008 chapter 9 . 3/23/2008 Man I have been waiting for this chapter forever and it's really good. I hope that the next chapter don't take that long and will be even better. Cann't wait. |
| akaCHEEKS chapter 8 . 3/22/2008 good so far. still reading it! |
| Carmel March chapter 9 . 3/22/2008 This story makes me smile. Keep up the amazingness :) ~Carm~ |
| Shelbaybayz chapter 9 . 3/22/2008 I like the story so far / was really hopin for a hot steamy sex scene, still need that penis ahaha. You da ho.. Love your story! |
| Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 9 . 3/21/2008 This is absolutely amazing so far! I couldn't stop reading! It's written so beautifully as well. Please update very, very soon! |
| anon11345 chapter 9 . 3/21/2008 hey! Long time reader. first time reviewer. lol. I LOVE ur story! It is absolutely amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter! |
| Ck90 chapter 9 . 3/21/2008 How many reviews do you need? I will gladly review ten times. On my first review: 1. I loved this chapter! It didn't really feel like a filler more like an informative champter. 2. I like Kenny and Debbie: debbie was the real estate agent wasn't she? i love the way you portray their relationship. 3) Alex hates himself too much I think, but I guess that is part of his character. What is Ali going to do about his poor self esteem? TAht should be interesting.4) Can't wait for the next update! Pleae make it soon! Ok I lied I only got four reviews done. But hey that has to count for something dosen't it? Update Soon! |
| Shelbaybayz chapter 8 . 3/21/2008 Sahara, hurry up and freaking post chapter 9 /. Love, Shelby p.s. you make shelby sound like a total bitch haha |
| Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 1 . 3/9/2008 This looks like such an amazing story! You write beautifully! I'd love to see more! Please update soon! |
| miss laina chapter 1 . 3/5/2008 hmm... i like it so far. :] |
| sousie chapter 9 . 2/3/2008 awsome can't wait to read more |