That was so hot... I think I was more frustrated by the interruption than Alex!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

Great job. Looking at some of the previous chapters, I would have to agree that they had too much dialogue; however, this chapter had just the right amount. Personally, I like to know how the characters feel about some of the situations and comments people make, so this chapter was one that held me firmly until the end. I look forward to other chapters. Until then, I'll be lurking in the shadows. ;)

MUAHAHAHA I KNOW THE PLOT TWIST! garharhar...and not because I cheated and looked ahead...but I DO know who the killer was... :D

Amazing so far, please update soon!

I really love this story. I love Alex and his wacky character traits. Please update soon!

No! Cliff hanger! Omg, this is so good. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love your writing style and you are awesome with the details but not overly so. -glomp-

Hey, i loved your starting scene, the dark and thrilling atmosphere of club and alleyway of the first 2 chaps was set up beautifully. Alexander is so sexy with his mysterious air and supernatural beauty. I especially love the intensity of alleyway scene, like something out of a horror movie. But I got a big confused around Chap 4, with Alexander and Alianna's dialogue seeming more like childish banter from a high school cliche fic instead of a dark vampire story? I personally missed the instensity of the first few chapters, but I left the story at the stairway banter scene so I dunno what the later chapters are like?

I reckon your intro atmosphere setting was so amazing and beautiful, and I would really love to read more of that style from you!

This story is growing on me

wow ok you have to update soon

i really like this story

i love their chemistry

Aw poor Alex.

JM

Great Chapterness! good job!

Love the story.

and Alex is so sweet, especially

with Ali. and Kenny is also pretty

adorable too :D

PLEASE UPDATE!

Wow. that was an intense chapter!

when is her birthday?