Reviews for Hazel Eyes
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
sad ending.. I like the typing piane metaphor.. and the similie in that last line was awesome
SirScott chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
I liked this poem. The lashes more like spears. That line was the perfect ending to this piece.

SirScott
ShadyUltima chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I really liked that. Quite a nice love poem