Dammit. Not fair.. :'(
Very well written btw.. :)

it was so sad yet beautifull love... :( :)

Its so good. but sad that it ended like that.

Oh fudge you really you made me tear up! Somehow it was ok when I read it the first time but when I re-read the lines again I teared up. Will Riley really go back? I somehow honestly doubt in a way. If he didn't catch the girl cheating he probably wouldn't be as sad. It's as if he's saying those out of guilt. God that's just sad.

OHHH this was so sad! i love it so much! i am crying buckets and omg love ur story!one of the best

Although I absolutely love how the story has that plot twist...it's so sad! I need a happy ending T.T

what the ! I - hated the end ... good work...

Omg, you made me cry. D:

It was fast paced so I really didnt know the characters all that well.

And when he killed himself I felt no emotional attachment what so ever.

I actually started to cry at the end. I know they are fictional and all, but the only thing that gets me crying for a story is when someone who they dearly love is rejected by said person and then something horrible happens to them like death. He probably wouldn't of gone back either considering the situation which just makes it all much worse.

Completely sad, depressing, horrible story that merits a two-thumbs up. Wonderfully written, full of emotion and a job well done.

Ok, this is really mean. I knew from the start that he would probably kill himself but in the end I still had tears in my eyes. God, I hate sad endings (even if this story was beautiful...)

I probably reviewed this long ago when I read it, but I had to come back and re-read. This is one of the saddest stories I've ever read on here, and one of the best.

Thanks for writing it.

Oh it was so sad...You kind of felt it coming but I couldn't turn away. Terribly sad ending but very honest and great to read. Thanks for writing it.

God...i hate this and love this at the same time.