Reviews for Cancer Cure
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Very descriptive and specific. This makes the theme relatable for the reader in a universal sense, but still holds true to the individual, and the individuality of the situation. I like how you've used concrete, tangible images to express these feelings rather than lounging in the abstraction, which many other writers tend to do on such topics. Good work. Specific, relatable, and emotional. Well done.
purplepants chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
this is a very nice poem and i like the metaphor. the detail was great but there were a few parts in this where it seemed more like complaining. Lines like: "I would rather/Gag on regurgitation than waste/Even one more moment with your company." could be better/more creativley phrased. just my opinion. nice.