|Reviews for I'm|
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Such a prejudiced world we live in. *sigh*
Touching piece, really. I love the whole thing, especially the ending. I can relate...
My only suggestion is that you put "That's Gay." in quotation marks, because it's something people say - or at least that's what I took it to mean from the context.
But that's really minor. Great poem, and keep writing.