|Reviews for Far Apart|
| Evil Spawn chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Ouch, that made me hurt. I like your descriptions. But it sounds to me that all that came from lust not Love.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
I loved this piece as well. My favorite lines were:
"I should have said no
I could have said no
To those ink-stain blue
Eyes that stared into mine
Daring me to return the small smile
And believe that lives have happy endings
Forget about the world and its problems
And remember fantasies
I’ve been told my whole life
But nights like that are so few
When I was thrown back into reality
Where you are down on earth
And I’m on the other side of the moon"
Yes, lots of favorite lines.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
*nods* Hm...reminds me of my "Bittersweet Session." Still, nicely written.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Love, more or less, is painful. Good job.
| Love in Light chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
"When I was thrown back into reality,
Where you are down on earth,
And I'm on the other side of the moon."
Beautiful. I'm biased, of course - this is exactly how I feel right now. It's stupid to "stretch" oneself just to hear someone say what an awesome person you are. I love this, which is saying something, because I usually just love rhymes...
I could say more, but I won't.