Reviews for Far Apart
Evil Spawn chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Ouch, that made me hurt. I like your descriptions. But it sounds to me that all that came from lust not Love.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
I loved this piece as well. My favorite lines were:

"I should have said no

I could have said no

To those ink-stain blue

Eyes that stared into mine

Daring me to return the small smile

And believe that lives have happy endings

Forget about the world and its problems

And remember fantasies

I’ve been told my whole life

About love

But nights like that are so few

When I was thrown back into reality

Where you are down on earth

And I’m on the other side of the moon"

Yes, lots of favorite lines.

Brilliant job!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
*nods* Hm...reminds me of my "Bittersweet Session." Still, nicely written.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Love, more or less, is painful. Good job.

Love in Light chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
"When I was thrown back into reality,

Where you are down on earth,

And I'm on the other side of the moon."

Beautiful. I'm biased, of course - this is exactly how I feel right now. It's stupid to "stretch" oneself just to hear someone say what an awesome person you are. I love this, which is saying something, because I usually just love rhymes...

You're right.

I could say more, but I won't.