Reviews for a callous truth
Love in Light chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I agree with the other reviewer entirely. I'm so tempted to steal those last two lines - "you are just another memory in a strand of broken dreams." They fit so perfectly together - they belong with one another; it's like the opposite of broken love. And the author's note is a necessary addition to the poem - it's so down to earth compared to the flowery lines of the beginning.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I loved this. Especially the ending or "A/n". I don't think the poem would really be complete without it. I loved the lines "You are just another memory/in a strand of broken dreams." This was beautiful. Great job.