Reviews for The Revelation
Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Neat format. The last line sums it up nicely.
CountLuciferLeviathan chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
aw, this one is cute. to be honest though, i was hoping to read something a little dark, because of the word "Revelation" but that's my fault; anyways, this piece reminds me of my Venus pieces i've done.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
This piece flowed beautifully and it has an almost magical feel to it. The whole poem just flows along like music. I love it! Lovely job!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I like this a lot. Nice.

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I liked how this poem was layed out. It has its own face.