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randompoetry chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
the poem in generally was kind of boring. if you maybe put in some descriptions between the basic straight-fowardness it might work better. capitalizing You was creative, like it shows that "You", whoever he is, is very important. the last line was definitely the most powerful BECAUSE it throws some creative relatableness in there, it has more feeling in it. but it has potential, and the format is creative.