Reviews for She Doesnt Take Good Pictures
Time To Change chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
easily relatable. Nice use of rhyme.

some corrections; "She's just the girl whose there" - I think it should be "who's" and not sure about the "a" in "she doesn't have a nice hair"

really excellent poem :)
life like whoa chapter 1 . 4/20/2007

I know the feeling.

Well I think you ]

good poem hun.
contemptible chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I really love this.

she smolders chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
I usually don't like when rhyme is used in poems, but you made it work for me. This sounds a lot like me in some ways, except the fact that the camera makes my smile seem whiter than it actually is. Good use of repetition with the start of each line too. Oh, and thanks for your review. Take care.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Yeah, I know that girl. The girl that is [was] basically me. I love this. Great job.