Reviews for how naïve
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Aw! That's so sad. *tear* tear*


is now on my favorites.

C2345J chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
Such an incredibly powerful poem that hit me in such a strong way, keep writting
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
A very powerful piece! You managed to portray such a tragic picture in so few words. The emotion is strong and the image is clear. Once again, excellent job! I'm adding this to my favorites!
TragicDreams chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Very deep and powerful. You showed such a powerful, meaningful emotion in so few words. I liked this a lot! Keep writing!
Liliot chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Powerful piece! It's like a ton of bricks just hit my chest or something... really saddening. But also great.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Really good poem. I can't wait until you write more.
blackbirdfly chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
whoa... i have no clue how you gave me a good review. this was awesome. beyond it, actually. favorite poem list!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
I like this. Very nice.

(Thanks for the review!)

aprettywar chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
simple, but it definitely says a lot. there's a lot more beneath the surface. nice work.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
i really liked this. i like instead of something cliche like "upset" or "hurt" you use you are mad at works.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Wow, this was really cool. I just loved the ending. Wonderful job.