Reviews for Echo
vballgurl chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
oh dang! great first chapter!
pluie etourdie chapter 7 . 3/25/2007
I love it. But can she please dump Paul? Why would she stay with him when she knows she loves Aiden?
WriterRose chapter 7 . 3/25/2007
Wow this is an awesome story, but when is she going to break up with Paul? Soon I hope. Keep updating.
TheFallenHeroine chapter 7 . 3/25/2007
Got to say, i think this story is amazing...Can't wait to see what happens in the end!

Keep writing!

E x
pluie etourdie chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
It's so sad that they both love one another and yet... both created the perfect situation where that's impossible. I'll be interested to see how this secret past comes out.

Were they using protection, by the way? Or will this lead to something surprising later on?
Jamy98 chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
Oh! The joy, the angst, the hormones, the love! Just don't let her get pregnant. PLEASE?
Sam chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
I like the first 6 chapters so far and you posted all six in three days so I had to review. I like Aislynn's character because she's spunky and real. Interesting dilemma you've created for our two man protagonists. And you're cool to know Mazzy Star. The only constructive criticism is grammar, for example, you put the word her instead of him sometimes and you misspelled a few words other than that you got a good plot here. I hope you update soon. Thanks.
soccerbabe16 chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
gah! i knew the two of them would argue. She should dump paul, even if she doesn't automatically get with aiden i hate thinking of her with paul, he's so horrible! hope more romance comes soon.

awesome story and chapter :)
unlikely.story chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
I love this story!
templeton21 chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
Oh my goodness. Where did you find that picture of Aislynn? She is absolutely gorgeous!
soccerbabe16 chapter 4 . 3/22/2007
oh! verry interesting... LOL. This is an awesome story and i really hope that you update it again soon. i have to admit i am glad that they got together so quickly, but am surprised she gave up her virginity and all. Meh, what can you do if you're in love, right?
angeleyez61888 chapter 4 . 3/22/2007
I like how you have set this story up. i can't wait to find out what all happens next seeing how Aiden is just a little drunk...
pluie etourdie chapter 4 . 3/22/2007
Oh man you said things were happening fast - but whoa! Sex so sudden adn soon. Did she even break up with the bad boy yet? Should be interesting to see how this plays after w/ him being drunk at the time and all...
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