SO good. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. I feel bad...(i feel a rascal flatts song coming on!)

I feel bad...

Cause I can stand here strong

Cold as stone

Seems so wrong,

I can't explain it.

Whoa. Did NOT mean to start busting out with the rascal flatts. It just happened.

Oh. Let's be best friends.

Whoa. Did NOT mean to say that either.

WHAT UP? I LOVE THIS STORY. haha Okay, I don't know why I said "What up?" and I don't know why I said it in capital letters.

Sorry I didn't review some of the other chapters. I just really wanted to know what would happen next instead of writing a review. I can't really say I found any errors in this chapter. Once again, I love your lyrics choice.

I love the way you wrote this. I truly do. There's a lot of profoundness to the way Aiden and Aislynn interact. I love it. I also positively LOVE the way your music lyrics goes with the story.

I like

i loved this story. i cant wait to start reading the sequel.

bye,

Brokencrystal7

wow that was a really emotional chapter. i almost started crying because they both love each other but they dont think that the other would ever love the other one back. also when aiden called her a bitch... i was so close on crying but i had to remember that this was just a story, well very well writen story.

hope you read me poems and story.

please keep writing,

brokencrystal7 :)

I loved it. There are sentence problems and mechanical errors here and there, but overall I really like the story. I am quite sad Aidan tried to kill himself, and in actuality men usually don't slit their wrists to committ suicide, but very good. I am quite excited to read the sequel.

Woah. How twisted is this?

Oh dear. He's in love with her? Infatuated with her? And she's not? Poor thing. But ah, I wonder how they'll end up together. Only one way to find out!

gulistanlik

great story, onto the sequel now D

i dont understand why he jst doesnt break up wif Dee already and be with Ash, i mean what is he waiting for? i mean he doesnt care about Dee so y not break up wif her so Ash doesnt get jealous in the mean time while he still has to come to Ash

god, i read the first chapter and im hookd already )

I loved how this story had so much drama!

I read it all in about 3-4hrs, well including an hour break for food. Anyway, I really like it! I'm going to read the sequel and can't wait to know what has happened between them!

Very well written.

The sex is too graphic to keep a T rating though, I think. And the F word was used excessively.

I liked the story, but I wasn't prepared for the material in it that is more than worthy of an M rating.

Maybe you could change it? Just a suggestion. It's your story, after all. ;)