|Reviews for window streaks|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
people leave the lights on throwing rubbish everywhere rubbish in sea rubbish everywhere rubbish in the sea rubbish everywhere sooooo recycle ruse reduce repairrrrr 2 times
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Captain Bligh—control freak
Clicking steps—planks of teak
Wooden walls—briny leak
Crashing wave—trough to peak
Oil—sprang forth—& Steel
Megalopolis ate all
Flitting—here & there
Every one's inside one ship
With Bligh's precision motivator
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
This has an excellent sound and spin. I like how the movement carries the sound as well as the imagery. This could be an everywhere poem, or a right here poem, which is a difficult thing to achieve. Good write. MD:77.
| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
This isn't bad. You've done well to create a piece that doesn't need punctuation and uses verbs well. It's just a tad dull, it works but there's no vivid pull that makes me really interested and I think that lies in your word choice. It's almost too simple.
Otherwise, good idea executed well.