Reviews for vanity
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
short and sweet. adore the title.

'i wish you would

leave behind the

weight that keep

you grounded'

that especially was amazing & spectacular.
she smolders chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
The last verse is such a sad one. Oh, and I think you meant to say "keeps", not "keep". Otherwise, this poem is lovely in its simplicity.

I'm happy that I'm able to read your poems again. It feels good to start over. :)