|Reviews for Bedroom Jesus|
| glimpses from an ivory tower chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
May I take a moment to laugh at the other reviewer?
"It's like she worships the sex."
At least she understood something about the poem.
On a side note, I'm surprised you don't have legions of Catholic reviewers flaming you for the adulterous sex. Not that I object, :).
Outstanding imagery, again, and the ending blew me away. You could probably leave out the "anyways", solely because the phrase begins with "after all," but that's a matter of choice. I'm liking the formatting style too...very interesting.
Excellent work, as usual, and I look forward to reading more.
| notated descant chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
It's evident the character is looking for Jesus in all the wrong places... "her altar is dressed/with crumpled and stained sheets" -my favourite line. It's like she worships the sex. A very intriguing poem... wonderful job!