|Reviews for To Fly Without Wings|
| Aelux chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I'm so glad I read this one. I loved the imagery in this and it reminded me of a movie "spirit: stallion of the cimerron" - if I spelled that right. For some reason, that movie was so nostalgic in my mind while reading your poem. Of course you weren't talking about a literal horse, but the freedom implyed by your imagery was envisaged this nicely in my mind. I hope I can see more stuff like this from you.
The first few that I read just didn't flow right, imo...I think this direction here, is what you should focus on. This, I could see being your forte. Thanks again for the review on my site, i'll be checking back to see if you have any new stuff.