Reviews for The World
All Along chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
I like your writing style, you have a good deal of talent and your ideas are fairly clear and easy to understand. I like your imagery, as it makes it easy to understand just what you're getting at and isn't overly complex or pretentious.

I can't say that I can agree with the seemingly nihlistic viewpoint of this particular piece, although at times I find myself with a similar mindset. Kudos though, well written overall and although I don't necessarily like the idea in itself I enjoyed it's presentation.

I apologize for the far from technical nature of my review, I am not well versed in the mechanics of poetry or any of that and can't provide any particularly in depth criticism in that respect.