Reviews for The Supermarket Saga
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thisaccounthasbeenlefttowither chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
This my friend, is some very funny shit!
Jasrey Blue chapter 3 . 3/4/2008
Well that was my favorite. The "girl detective". I hate those stories.
Jasrey Blue chapter 2 . 3/4/2008
Perfect.
Meilee chapter 3 . 1/14/2008
haha! so funny! keep updating!
Lil Chubb Rocket chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Freakin funny!

Write on!
Tasha Lee chapter 2 . 11/11/2007
More, please. :D
Rachel Sumner chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Hahaha that's pretty good! Certainly made me chuckle ]

I especially like the descriptions, like "orange and gold, like a diamond on fire"

Keep up the good work!
shadowcat86 chapter 2 . 6/13/2007
What made you decide to continue?

Oh well, either way I liked this one a lot better than the first chapter for some reason, although I wish I could tell you why.
Cella N chapter 2 . 6/13/2007
-snerk- Poor Tom. I feel really sorry for him. Jobs as rutine-attached as those often get on your brains, don't they? For some sick reason, though...I was giggling at the end.

"Opsies!"
Cella N chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Here I am!

Very humorous, I liked it. Amusing, made me giggle. I like how you overlap her writing, her fantasy and the reality all together. Worth a great giggle, thanks so much.
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
ooh, nice story. i like the use of italics too!
Jasrey Blue chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
That was hilarious but you could have added more to it.
SadHappyFace chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
LOL. Awesome. Seriously. HAhaha. I love this.
Lex Anderson chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
I can say, as a former cashier/bagger, that old women are one of the few things I didn't make love to on a conveyor belt.

The last line almost redeemed what was pretty much a predictable romantic fantasy comedy story.
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