Reviews for The Supermarket Saga |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This my friend, is some very funny shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was my favorite. The "girl detective". I hate those stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. |
![]() ![]() haha! so funny! keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Freakin funny! Write on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More, please. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha that's pretty good! Certainly made me chuckle ] I especially like the descriptions, like "orange and gold, like a diamond on fire" Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What made you decide to continue? Oh well, either way I liked this one a lot better than the first chapter for some reason, although I wish I could tell you why. |
![]() ![]() ![]() -snerk- Poor Tom. I feel really sorry for him. Jobs as rutine-attached as those often get on your brains, don't they? For some sick reason, though...I was giggling at the end. "Opsies!" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here I am! Very humorous, I liked it. Amusing, made me giggle. I like how you overlap her writing, her fantasy and the reality all together. Worth a great giggle, thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, nice story. i like the use of italics too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hilarious but you could have added more to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. Awesome. Seriously. HAhaha. I love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can say, as a former cashier/bagger, that old women are one of the few things I didn't make love to on a conveyor belt. The last line almost redeemed what was pretty much a predictable romantic fantasy comedy story. |