Reviews for While You're Gone
Nenphis chapter 2 . 3/28/2007
I like it..it's quite interesting...I realy want to keep reading and I got used to your style of writing, so update soon ;)
Mass Genocide chapter 2 . 3/25/2007
Hey I like this story, I'm kinda getting the hang of reading it like this, but so far I think you have a good plot going. However, there are a few grammar mistakes, but those can be fixed later. Good Job and I can't wait for you to Update!

Mass Genocide
Audrey Ronson chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
Really interesting, I like the style you use. There are sentence fragments but I think it works for the way you're telling it, but try not to over do it.