Reviews for Mistake
blue-fires7269 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
This poem does prove how sorry isn't enough sometimes. It shows how that feeling makes us truly feel, and that is what makes it great.
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Wow, great poem, shows readers a clear image of lament, really well written, great work, keep writing!

~Lurid~
Flaming Pickadillyrose chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
I really like it its very good and emotinal i think

Ur a god poet

I am very new but I was wonderign if u could review my poems only 2 and give ur opinion?

They are called Break all bonds, and new edited version...tnx anyway fro a gd poem.
xXPoeticNightmareXx chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Alright. You said reading these would help me to get inside your head.

I need a little help. What's this about? Because I highly doubt this has anything to do with anything I know about..
Sadie Lynn chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
who is this about.. who is this for?
Sadie chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
hey i really like this.. i love the fact that you aren't afraid of going deep here. it's better when you don't know who the person is.. but at least i get the joy of knowing this great author.. LuL tofu.. i mean Twilight Wolf..

Sadie

oh and i think that i can forgive you.. and i think that you are genuinely sorry and i think that you need to know that someone does forgive you.. and that is me..
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
I know the feeling. This is so true. I like it! I am going to add this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

(TSP)
Dameon Kuroshiro chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Beautifull poem, I recognize myself in it.
bob chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
this is a lot like shanes xanth but it was also really good.

-Twilight Wolf