Reviews for Tribute to Betty
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Beautiful, heartfelt work here. I have to say I am glad that you chose to include among your fictionpress pieces a longer poem. You have a very subtle, intentional, smooth way of writing.

I am truly sorry for your loss, but this is a fitting and truly wonderful tribute.

The emotions carries powerfully and clearly and the last two lines are excellent.

Continue writing!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Beautiful poem.

I'm so sorry for your loss.
daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
so beautiful,

and sad

good job!
To Be Ascertained chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Very lovely indeed. All the words linked nicely with each other, not stumbling anywhere. I like the 'One star/Shining brighter than the rest/So full of life/and full of zest' line. It all adds to the dreamy, conversational style, like it was all a collection of thoughts that flowed with each other. Favourited!
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Very sweet. The flow works well for this piece. I really like the lines: "No matter how near

No matter how far

I carry you with me

In the wink of a star"

Lovely.