|Reviews for Tribute to Betty|
| Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Beautiful, heartfelt work here. I have to say I am glad that you chose to include among your fictionpress pieces a longer poem. You have a very subtle, intentional, smooth way of writing.
I am truly sorry for your loss, but this is a fitting and truly wonderful tribute.
The emotions carries powerfully and clearly and the last two lines are excellent.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
I'm so sorry for your loss.
| daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
| To Be Ascertained chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Very lovely indeed. All the words linked nicely with each other, not stumbling anywhere. I like the 'One star/Shining brighter than the rest/So full of life/and full of zest' line. It all adds to the dreamy, conversational style, like it was all a collection of thoughts that flowed with each other. Favourited!
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Very sweet. The flow works well for this piece. I really like the lines: "No matter how near
No matter how far
I carry you with me
In the wink of a star"