Reviews for Breathe
Ebony3ssence chapter 8 . 3/4/2009
I loved this story. Its amazing! You should have way more reviews for it. I totally feel for Jimmi. I love her character. But thanx for writing this fantastic story. It sodeserves an award!

DestinyUnleashed chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
This story was easily the best I've read in ages. HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU HAVE ONLY A FFEW REVIEWS? LOL. Anyway all ranting aside- you're a great writer and Ilove your stories,

Malissa Michelle White chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Wait a obviously live in LA. Otherwise there'd be no way in Hell you'd be able to know about Eagle Rock in the 90s. I'm guessing you're still in high school by now.

Gangster Valedictorians? Interesting concept, but the writing is a little shaky. Needs slightly more comedy, and a little less stiff resolution toward destruction-it makes it obvious, and therefore, far less believable. But i'll give it a shot.
pinkfluffyoranges chapter 8 . 11/7/2007
This story was simply put AMAZING. It seems you hit the nail on the head in every possible way when writing a story. The only thing troubling me is why Duran didn't notice or question the bruises when they were having sex? But other than that, thanks for giving me something so impossibly good to read