Reviews for Holes and Stains
moksha chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
well, you did use the word "intoxicating" twice to describe, ah, the same thing. but shit happens, i suppose.

wow, yay, more drugs and better yet, some special european cigarettes. it's all kind of versatile, wouldn't you say?

eloquently worded and pretty, because i'm guessing you most likely desired a review that recognized this as art.
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
excellent descriptions; it paints such a vivid picture and it reminds me of a movie

goodness.. someone could turn this one paragraph into the setting of an entire story

fantastic job!
lalala676 chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
The descriptions were great and I could visualize it so well! Great job- A! :P
little smiles chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
Our english teacher never gives us anything like this! It's a shame you never got it back, but I would say you did very well; I found it a really interesting read. There's an unusual sense of detachment about it, which I thought mirrored the useage of drugs perfectly. I loved the sentence "Beautifully blowing intoxicating smoke", such a unique description.