Reviews for Cocaine Lust
dancers chapter 1 . 8/5/2007
I love acidic used as a sense adjective. Especially with taste and scent. Really gives a poem a really good edge.

I loved the way you also put a sense of sight into this. 'Morbid colours' was a wonderful way to open the poem.

Great work!

I read through a few of your poems and decided to review this one because you said it was one you were proud of. I can see why. Keep it up.
DOORphrame chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Great poem. The single word on each line formatting fit it really well, I think it portrayed the simplicity of craving. I can intimately relate too, which is another reason I liked it. The only thing that really irked me was the word 'sunlight' being split in two, it was distracting. Though that's just my personal take.